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Forever Yours

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Have you ever seen a baby bird
learning how to fly?
Or watched an eagle soaring
acorss the painted sky?

Do you remember when
your baby called you "Dad"?
Their first word ever spoken,
and how your heart felt glad?

That is exactly what they'll feel
when you recover and come back home;
their happiness can't be written here,
it's just for you, and you alone.

Get well soon, be brave, be strong; your family
stands by you now, forever, with hearts of song...

                             

 

 

Author notes

Dedicated to Liam. Get well soon, your family is waiting!!

"Don't be afraid, for I am with you. Do not be dismayed, for I am your God. I will strengthen you. I will help you. I will uphold you with my victorious right hand." ~Isaiah 41:10

(keep the faith - remember the love!)

"Fear Not." ~God

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A Get Well Sonnet.

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  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    May 21

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    Liam is very lucky to have a poem like this written...
    I do hope he is recovering very quickly so he can be with his family again....

    Words like these should help.....

    Niaish Ma eno
    XXJeannette

  • judmc
    May 19

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    Lovely poem

    Liam some one must love you very much to write such a
    lovely heartfelt well written poem as this hope you get better soon Best Wishes and a speedy recovery
    ....George...


  • Little Blue Bird
    May 19

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    Wow

    Niaish for sharing this wonderful piece with us. It lifted my spirit, so I am sure it lifted the spirit of the one it was written for, especially the scripture at the end. Again, Niaish for sharing. from Niaish Ma Eno.


  • Kari gold member
    May 18
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    This is very beautiful!


  • Three Doves
    April 24

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    Your Sonnet, beautifully written, brought a truth back. When someone in our heart hurts, we all hurt. Thank you! We are one when we are together. Of one mind and one accord.
    In God's Love
    Three Doves

  • judmc
    April 24
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    Beautiful poem

    Get well soon Liam I dont know you but you have my blessings and hope you soon return, well again, back to your loving family...George...

  • PureCountry
    April 22

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    A Wonderful Thought

    comprised in poetic verse. Your words of encouragement are rendered tenderly as only a true friend would do. Such sincereity of heart enables anyone to continue to press on, knowing others care. Niaish for sharing with us all.

    Niaish Ma Eno leaving some love on your page.

    Respectfully,
    Silent Hawk


  • LittleMoon silver member
    April 22

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    Whoever Liam is I wish him well and God speed his way back to good health. This is a lovely write and I am sure he will appreciate it very much. Sheila


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    April 22

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    This is a pretty god write, good luck in the contest. Very nicely written and it was very much a pleasure to read.


  • anaisnais
    April 22

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    A well thought out piece, written beautifully to encourage your friends health and to welcome them back to the familiar warmth of comfort... The feeling you describe is wonderfully covered, for you seem to say it with such perfection, it's just as it is - for that one special person at that time...Niaish/Thankyou. Morning Dove, Niaish Ma eno from all your children.


  • Katie Lazette
    April 22

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    A beautiful and heartwarming poem. May your friend have a quick recovery and return home to his loved ones.


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    April 22

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    Such beautiful  heart felt words of a quick return to health...could truly be a halmark card your love and kindness is over whelming so this day dear sister you have been choosen as our inside poem of the week i do hope you enjoy all the love that shall be coming to you Niaish dear one for just being you for all of us to love


    • Cynthia Gaines gold member
      April 22
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      Thank you very much for your thoughtful words and deeds, you are a very kind heart and soul!! You made my day complete!! I am honored to have this poem chosen for the inside poem, Twilight Panther. And let's all remember Liam, and hope and pray he fully recovers... Peace, love & hugs to you always, xx Cyn xx


  • DolceVito gold member
    April 21

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    Beautiful

    Wonderful words of encouragement...God, I hope Liam pulls through.


  • a59teeth
    April 20

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    so very sweet!

    i love the examples of joy you've given to encourage in this. i am not sad or hurt and felt encouraged myself.

    i especially enjoyed your ending two lines! well done!


  • Celticpoet silver member
    April 20

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    Incredible!

    Once again my eyes tear up and my heart swells at your words...fortunate indeed is he who earned this lovely write...incredible work..Dan xx


  • arafura gold member
    April 20
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    Beautifully said. You are such a kind soul!


  • Puppydog gold member
    April 20

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    SWEETLY UPLIFTING!!!!

    Your sweet words are sure to make his heart sing and stay bright til he gets home to his family.


  • doolie gold member
    April 20

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    Aw, Cyn this really touched me deep. Such a beautiful and heartfelt write. A wonderful dedication to Liam.

    Great Job


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    April 20

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    Beautiful sentiments embedded within this piece and good flow of the unforced rhyming verse--
    These circumstances are so tragic for this man and his family and may we all unite in prayer on his behalf.
    Well Done!


  • Ethereal One gold member
    April 20

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    so beautiful

    Your words are so encouraging in this beautiful poem. The message is tender, true, and straight from your heart.

    The 2nd stanza really touches deep emotions. (if the reader is a parent)

    Wonderful encouragement for your friend.

    Jeannette


  • Gunther gold member
    April 20

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    Beautiful dedication! Sometimes we need to be reminded that we are loved and important to others.
    Nicely done!---Mark


  • geckogirl silver member
    April 20

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    this Cyn is an aboslutely beautiful dedication... you should be proud of yourself...
    Blessing Always
    Much Love
    Sue


  • Antipodi
    April 20

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    Beautiful teardrops in verse when special ones get sick one feels so helpless and love burns in our hearts with despair all we can do is maintain the beauty of life ...an excellently crafted write dear poet


  • Floatational
    April 20
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    I really like this poem very beautiful keep up the good work.


  • maralisa silver member
    April 20

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    aw this is a wonderful write of encouragement I love your rhyme and flow throughout good luck in the contestmaralisa

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