THe early morning humidity slapped her face and took an all compromising rush through her body. And as her feet hit pavement she begins to run. The sun had just reached itself over the horizon of houses in her simple suburban neighborhood. The wind was barely to speak of as sweat began to trickle down her back by her very first turn. The air was silent; occasional cars, maybe a plane or two, but she took no notice to it as her IPOD blared[casting crowns]in her ears and the steady beat of her feet hitting the ground.
As her body loosened and each muscle worked for the strength to push her on her mind spirawled into a series of uncomfortable emotions that have seemed to over compensate ever being of what she's been in the past few weeks. [someday] he really just doesn't get it. That day doesn't exist any longer. She thought it was what she needed to carry her into tomorrow. [Would it tear us apart letting you hear everything I've always needed to say?]
And as she climbs the final incline in a steady speed and play of muscles she realizes everything she's been missing since she became[created]such a beautiful calamity. She's thinking over and over again. Why did he even begin to think they could ever make it right again? Why did he even think I could ever belong to him again?
[i know I'm going to break]
I've just got to let him go.
Author notes
I hope this makes sense in the idea that he takes over my thoughts no matter how much I want to let him go. He still makes up every bit of my being and destroys any progress each time I think I've inched far enough away.
He's destroyed me.
loveyou doll! =] ♥
WishMeAway--x
A contest entry
- lonely stars and shattered spectrums by Kiss the girl--x.
700 points, ended May 27, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
you can't blame someone for vanishing when they're already gone.
Comments
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i really like this. i think that you could get away with changing the title to just "fire [you're still corroding my heart]" very well written, nice imagery! congrats on the hm!
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this gave me shivers, it's so just amazing.
and makes me want to cry a little.
it's amazing not rubbish.
♥
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thanks baby.
I was very afraid you wouldnt like it!
It makes me want to cry as i read it over again too.
iloveyou♥
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fire[you're still corroding at my heart]
hope thats okie
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I finished baby.
i'm sorry it took so long
it's rubbish anyway!
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it's not rubbish at all.
sorry i've not replied to your message or commented on this, i've been in hospital sweetie. i'll explain in a message.
imissyoutoo.
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