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Take back your blood

You hide your true face
trying to protect us.
Take the pain with grace
and never want to discuss
Your torture.

Quiet affliction affects
those who care the most.
You never say the words
just raise the Norco dose
and drift.

You say he hurt us all
and you would never.
Now you shy from the cure
"no needles, Ever"
You shout.

Take back your blood
fix your brain.
My tears flood
a blinding rain.
I die.

Without you.



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  • XOxYuKkIxOx
    April 20

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    I really enjoyed reading this. I love the style and i can actually feel the raw emotions you put into this piece of work


  • My Last Breath.x
    April 20

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    I really like this; it's somewhat light in the sense that it doesn't go into real detail; lets the readers imagination somewhat take over; but its deep because of the choice of words you had. "Quiet affliction" For some reason I love those two words. Powerful<3


  • Broken--dreams
    April 20
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    Good Write. I really like this poem. =) its deep.