Determination doesn’t even touch the feeling
that is running rampant through my body.
I am here on a mission, and I will not leave
until I am completely satisfied.
Gazing slowly around the room,
I am looking for one who can help me.
I see you-instantly, my pulse quickens.
I have made my decision, for the moment.
Catching your eye, I raise an eyebrow,
not only a question-but an invitation.
Your welcoming smile is your response,
so I rise and glide across the room.
Reaching your table, I lean across your body
and whisper in your ear, “Wanna fuck?”
You don’t answer, it isn’t necessary.
Sitting your drink on the table, you stand.
You offer me your hand, but I don’t take it.
Instead, I lead the way, body swaying before you.
You eagerly follow, not close enough to touch,
but, close enough for me to feel the heat from you.
As soon as we reach the room and the door closes,
I turn to face you, grabbing the green fabric
that covers your perfect chest, I rip it from your body,
setting off a frenzy of flying clothes
Falling together onto the bed, your hands are exploring,
becoming familiar to my every curve and valley.
Enjoyable, yes, but deciding I want more,
I push your head between my legs,
Hungrily, you devour my pink offering
with a masterful tongue, spearing in and out.
Flicking quickly over my most sensitive button,
you bring me closer, and I almost cum…
but stop.
I raise your face to mine with a drunken expression,
cleaning the juices from your face with my kisses.
I reach for you, finding your heat, gently stroking-
making sure you are ready for my mouth.
I push you back against the wall.
Greedily taking your cock in my mouth-
to tonsils and beyond, relishing every inch,
and when I can feel you about to explode…
I stop.
You grab me, spinning me around,
and enter me quickly from behind,
thrusting wildly, arms around me,
hands on my breasts, begging for release.
Grabbing a handful of my hair,
you pull-not so gently-arching my back,
and bite me, so deliciously hard,
on my shoulder, sensations overwhelm me
I scream “Fuck me harder, damn it!”
I cry my release with agonizing gasps,
sending you into shuddering oblivion.
Lost together in glorious orgasm,
we ride each wave until only ripples remain.
Silently, we dress-
leaving the room without another word.
I don’t know where you are headed,
But I’m going back to the bar,
in search of Round Two.
Author notes
Prompt--
I'm in the mood for a quickie right now...
In an elevator...
In the backseat of a car...
In an airplane lavatory...
In an alleyway....
But I'm unable to have one right this second...
SO GIVE ME ONE!!!...
In a list
A contest entry
- Quick Quickies for Occasional Quicksters by white stone.
777 points, ended April 29, 16 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ADULT Prewrite Contest! Gold, Silver or Bronze Winning Pieces Only!!! by cybilseyes.
700 points, ended July 9, 28 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Holy Jeezus.. your erotic cup overfloweth... lol wonderful write!
xo
Cyb
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Thank you.
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No wonder you got the gold with this one!
Okay, I have to compose myself, and wipe that sweat from my brow. This piece is a true testament to the power of erotic writing in its purest form of arousal. I love the intensity in this one. Standing ovation!
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Thanks so much. I was very shocked...and pleased...with how this one turned out, lol. I don't know where this one came from
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I bow to your erotic prowess.....
hehe
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This was overflowing with feminine power, intelligence and confidence....
Oh...
Did I say SEXY AS HELL?....
Yeah, I pretty much knew you were getting gold the moment I read this. I will certainly be reading more of your work...
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Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!!!! I cannot believe it!
Um...guess this means I gotta write more, so you'll have something to read,
Thanks again!
Amy
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Are you really surprised, or are you putting me on?
You HAD to know this was damn good...
backatcha
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All I can say is...my muse was well stimulated,
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After that comment, so am I!
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Glad I could help
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Omg girl!! You won!!! Woot! Woot! Told ya that night it was screaming hot
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OMG!!!!! I'm speechless...ok...not speechless, but WOW! I am very surprised!!!
Thanks for the boost of confidence! Now, how can I top this????
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I'm not sure but I'm waiting to read when you do
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Very Naughty, I loved It....Great write
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Wonderfully erotic, intense images that burn with fiery passion
Splendidly written in vivid colour and taste.
Be blessed in all you do.
Tony
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Thank you so much. It was an...um...interesting write.
Amy
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Hellfire
You go girl..I can't look! ohh my virgin eyes LOL Hmmmm errrr hot ass write. 
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Thank you so much for reading. I got some sunglasses you can borrow, to make the reading easier,
A
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a very intense write!!
i also do not imagine that i could write like this. but, you have done it exquisitely! very detailed and Very sexy!!
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Thank you for your kind comment.
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This is really good I don't know if I could write a peice like this. You went into the detail really well and wrote more passionatly then you know, lol.
Anyway sorry if that is confusing. great write and best of luck in the contest!
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Thank you. I didn't think I could do it either. Sometimes, I shock myself, lol.
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Cheers girlfriend..
I believe I'M the one that needs a drink after reading that
Love,
Stacy
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Whew...I think I need the whole bottle, lol.
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we'll pass it around..
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LOL....the bottle, right????
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*sigh..fine...yeah,sure..the bottle LOL
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hey...I'll share....
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hehe
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