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Fall Back

A swan on the water
An angry mob of flowers blooming in and out
The waves are back
The waves attack
Fall back
Fall back

No definition for a still-born color
The lights dance and fade in and out
The painting is back
The painting attacks
Fall back
Fall back

Could you only imagine a world with no flaws
Stupidity, absurdity, beauty, day in and day out
Humanity is back
Humanity attacks
Fall back
Fall back

The hands of God engulf us
A savior's mind dreaming, plotting in and out
Religion is back
Religion attacks
Fall back
Fall back

The world sits here in decadence
Lives on a hospital bed being taken in and out
A miracle is back
A miracle attacks
Fall back
Fall back

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  • Courtney...this is Kathryn...just so remember, even though you're sitting right here, I just want you to know...THIS POEM IS FU-REAKING AWESOME!!!! Luv ya