In his heart
tenderness aches
As
I wish to soothe
A contest entry
- 10 words only by Salty Hibiscus.
400 points, ended April 22, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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i like it...
simple...painful..
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emotions pour out onto the page.
like the placement of this ... poem.
love this as alway, L,
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come and soothe my aching heart please.
great write and i am sure many people can relate to it. thanks for your entry.
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balanced
Superby balanced!
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