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Moon's Halo

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Faithful moon - she's seen
our worldy artocities,
and yet, she still shines.

 

 

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Image: A 22 degree halo around the moon, as seen from Boulder, Colorado. Found on Wikipedia, licensed by Hustvedt, with permission to use: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Moon

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  • writebrain
    April 23
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    Simply stunning write.
    Well done!


  • Life is a Beach gold member
    April 21
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    Just as the sun shines on good and evil...so too does the moon! Nice Cyn! Pam


  • arafura gold member
    April 21
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    Lovely! BTW Australian bushmen would say a ring around the moon is a sure sign of rain to come.


  • Jesann gold member
    April 20
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    Wonderful.."Faithful moon"
    An interesting thought.
    Nicely done.
    Great pic.


  • maralisa silver member
    April 20
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    a wonderful haiku thank you for sharingmaralisa


  • Daizee silver member
    April 19
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    How very alluring... your words suited the picture...

    Love,
    Stacy


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    April 19

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    A lot of imagery and profound thought in a minimum of words--
    Well Done!!

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