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Confused Puss

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Who's that staring back at me and how did he get there?
I've paced this basin up and down and searched every where
There has to be a way across...maybe down this hole
If I try and then get stuck, then I will pay the toll

I've heard it said tho that curiosity killed the cat
I'm not about to ignore that smart arse ginger brat
I see the door behind him, but don't know where it is
I've lived here now for 3 years, it's got me in a tiz

A secret passage...yes that's it, I need to explore
There has to be a way in there...maybe through the floor
If he got there then I can too...just you wait and see
I'll give him what for and say the ruler here is ME

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  • LAPoe gold member
    April 20

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    OK at this very minute Cassie just jumped up in my lap.. I'm not kidding .. she must of known that I was reading a cat poem!!!

    I've just read it to her and her is her comment...


    m,vvgm,, ., fm,nm,b,..m,nbn .n.khb

    ok so she can't type very well... so I'll translate

    YIPPEE!!!!! it is puuuuuuurrrrrfect in all feline manners and ways!

    Yep I think she and me both loved it!

    doc & Cassie

  • Lol this is just gorgoeus! Love it to bits! I am sure that's what the cat is thinking
    Thanks so much for your entry
    Gaylene

  • Excellent take on the picture and very well structured with good flow of the unforced rhyming verse!
    Well Done & Best of Luck in the contest!