flying crane peace -
childhood's origami folds
augment or impede
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A contest entry
- Show me you really understand haiku by Mairi bheag.
950 points, ended April 22, 44 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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charming!
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Augment. definitely.
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I can't put my finger on why this does it for me, but it does.
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Wowzer!
Mairi has the best lineup of haiku I have ever seen. The thought here is fresh and emotive.
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Haiku says so much that it is one of my very most favored forms.
I do like your haiku here... cleverness! 
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Very fine! A wonderful little Haiku and it talks to the reader with a smooth delivery. I love the crane and the folds idea.
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