Look at me now
Look at what I am
This is what you made me
Smoking gun in hand
With the final judgement upon me
From Heaven I am banned
Banned far over the sea
Banned far over the land
Does it make you think?
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This poem is really good but I don't under stand the theme. It has good poetic measure but the words are too simple. Try to make it a little more complex and make the theme show more and it'll be a 3 clap poem!
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I like this. great job!
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