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...mrowl!






P
  O
      E
          M
                S

are  like ………  CATS!

W
R                    and    C        L  I  N               
A              G                U  R            G 
P        N                                                 
  P  I                                                    themselve  s                 
                          SOLIDTHINGS        und     
                                                aro
                                                                                   
Each    s e n s u a l    arch  and    C  U          E      is
                                                        R  V     


                          a  dance  of  secrets,

                                hints  of  profound,

                                      and neither gives a damn if we don’t

                                              get  it.         





                                                 

Author notes

thirty four words .....far too many really for any self-respecting cat!

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  • The Drifter
    May 11
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    So true, so true. Very well done.

  • Beautiful Irony
    May 9

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    I adore this!! It's genius. I like the poem, and I LOVE the form you've chosen. This is brilliant, pure brilliance. Well done, good job.


  • tomisb
    April 21

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    Very much a concrete poem of a type. A delight for me to read and wonder when the cat will press against my fingers demanding attention.
    Love, Tom B.