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Soul-Catcher

if i only had a camera
that could capure the soul
what is it that i could find?
that you bury from the world

the moments when he is not looking
the smile on his face at last
when in his daugher he sees himself
and with her time is passed

that glow in her eye as she sneaks a glance
at his face, the handsome line
of his brow, his chocolate eyes
that gorgeous smile that is all mine

if i only had a camera
that could grab your inner heart
for me to look at any time
would i bring them to life, or rip them apart?

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