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Sensations

pain feels sorrow
the mortal numbness overloads my temples
so no longer will i hope
but instead dream of you

bye bye tomorrow
present time overloads
the shadows supress
memories left unforgotten

I miss you with passion
and the words hurt
even though the imagination can never tell whether its you
or me
that are numb to our society.

I.
Cant.
Seem.
To.
Forget.
Lost.
Memories.

And though the sun rises early
my heart beats late
and im sorry
for forgetting you beyond hurt,

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  • Manic Reverie
    April 20
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    again, wow, Gilby you're incredible ^^