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Interlude

 

vibrations collide

when thoughts, old and new

breathe memory-

a time

within pause

 

suspended, healing flows

between moments

of interlude,

giving rest,

willingly claimed

 

 

moments heal

vibrating thoughts

when rest seeks Time

claimed within pause

Author notes

Poem form: Finclo

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  • FransB gold member
    April 26
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    Dear penman

    Thank you so much; enjoyed this contest very much. Frans


  • penman gold member
    April 24
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • myrataal silver member
    April 23

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    Ah Poet!

    This poem involuntarily made me think of the well-deserved rest you took at Jeffrey's Bay. (I must say: I was quite surprised to see that you actually slept until dawn, Professor Insomnia! )

    A wondrous application of your Finclo here, Friend.

    Love
    Myra


  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    April 20

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    Wow!

    Did I need to see this right now! A bit anxious about seeing my new therapist & Psych about issues that are coming up in new light & it's a bit unsettling. This is a wonderful form you've created with a psychological depth that I find very therapeutic & comforting. I'm really going to have to take a try at this. This is a brilliant write
    & thanks for this. Worthy of Gold in my book! I hate it when the emo gremlins eat up my emoticons!