Claustrophobic creation
a divine temptation
calling through yellow skin
the freezer opens
to pucker the face
of rather delicate tastebuds.
Author notes
Prompt: 31 flavours - Lemon
10 poets
20 words
30 minutes
Word Count: 20 words
In a list
A contest entry
- quickie XVIII by Salty Hibiscus.
400 points, ended April 19, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Whispers of the Muse by SubKitten.
3045 points, ended May 19, 156 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What'd you think?
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Great piece. Short and very descriptive. I like the very subtle imagery in this piece. The lack of punctuation works well, and the line breaks make the flow of this very smooth. Wonderful write!
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congratulations on the honorabole mention you have earned with this write and thank you for sharing it with me today. viyanna rosemarie
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My mouth puckered and watered up just thinking about lemons. lol.. Well done. bravo!
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lol i love it. creatively worded. lemons are so good and i enjoy lemonade and lemon sorbet. short and sweet. thank you for your entry.
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a nice take on the promt good luck in the contest
maralisa
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I loved the title and the content was just
Woaaah!
Brilliant,
Hope you place,
Kind regards & Good luck!
Sophie.
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