I'll keep calling.
And wishing and dreaming.
I'll keep screaming.
Are you thinking of me.
[[I'm smiling]]
I'll keep breaking,
and breathing,
i'll keep hurting,
and feeling,
it only hurts when I breathe,
I only break when it beats,
this lonely heart of mine.
[[I'm trying]]
Morphine to numb the pain,
and a blade to kiss the vein,
another chance gone down the drain.
[[And i'm laughing]]
Deep brown eyes,
a promise in disguise,
faithful to the lies.
[[I still believe in you]]
Rain drops scream defeat,
converse echo on wet concrete,
kiss of death, tastes so sweet.
[[I remember]]
[I breathe]
(I break)
*I scream*
::I ache::
For You.
..Just Another Brown Eyed Boy That Stole My Heart..
Author notes
I used the title, and the lyric prompt.
Not very good. DQ if you want.
A contest entry
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Comments
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zomg.
It was amazing. I loved it, I almost cried, I wanted to.
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Thanks
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I likey! great job. Keep up the good work Savi!
~Kiwi
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I think it's brilliant.
i love the dirty prettyness that you brought in.
it reminds me of a song, but i can't remember the title or artist...hmm :/
either way, this is brilliant
♥
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Fank yeww :]
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title:
he was just another brown eyed boy
lyric:
well i will keep calling you to see
if you're sleepin are you dreamin and
if you're dreamin are you dreamin of me
quote:
A woman knows the face of the man she loves as a sailor knows the open sea.
Honore de Balzac
hope those are okie
♥
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These are just fine :]
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