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My Dream Lover....

You and me walking along the beach,
Never thought, you'd be within my reach,
Holding your fingers, taking your hand,
As we feel our feet making prints, in the sand,
Wrap your fingers, hold on tight,
I'm gonna make love to you, all night,
Pressing your sweet lips into mine,
Something we've wanted for a very long time,
To feel your hot body pressing into me,
I could never get enough, I'm sure you see,
Lovin' you morning, noon and night,
You're in my arms, I'm holdin' you tight,

I love you baby now & always.....

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  • Rainbow7
    April 29
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    Pleasant and fascinating!
    Very well done!


  • Ken-Maverick
    April 28

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    A very shaweet write. Soft yet full of sensuality indeed with lovely rhythm and flow
    Wonderfully done buddy. Well done!

    Ken


  • Janjan
    April 23

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    Dear Jul: I beileve I too have written a poem with the same title, how weird, but in a good way! Yours is very sensual, and filled with passion! Love it! Love, Janjan xoxo