A cold Plastic heart
pumps florescent blood
through titanium veins-
Can you love me now?
Author notes
15 words off the promp plastic, this is probably the shortest poem I have ever writen that wasn't a Haiku.
This is poem 26 as 25 delt with suicide. I'll let you interperate it as the actual subject matter breaks your rules but no ones figured out what its supposed to be about so hopefully you don't mind.
A contest entry
- Quickie by Cyanide Dreams.
500 points, ended April 19, 4 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pre-writes Only....Give me your 25th poem by PurpleSky.
475 points, ended June 3, 48 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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very intersting and metaphoric. I liked your word usage. this was good for a Haiku Thank you so much for taking the time to enter my contest and best wishes to you!
huggles
Lena -
Even through it's brevity, it's a powerful piece. Your imagery was strong and your metaphor was great. Such a question. Deep. Leaves the reader wanting more, and is very abstract. Great job on this piece and good luck in the contest.
Josh
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