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Saga 10...A Colt Is Born

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The proud day in the meadow finally came

the day the small black colt was born

The white mare breeding new life did quite well

leaving the dark horse dazed and forlorn

 

He was black in color with a shinny glow

weak and wobbly in his thin long legs

He attempted to stand and walk around

but they appeared to be just pegs

 

Immediately he searched for his mothers milk

as she waited for him proudly close by

Ready to nourish the black colt on request

and make him shinny strong and spry

 

He appears to have a strong heart like his mom

gaining strength even though he is quite thin

Dark horse knows he'll be strong like his dad

with speed like a free spirit to the wind

 

The white mare and the dark horse

take turns nuzzling the colt everywhere

They want to assure him from the beginning

that both love him and they both do care

 

 

 

 

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  • Beret55 silver member
    April 25
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    That was a sweet write. Colts are so cute..
    Loved the poem..


  • LittleMoon silver member
    April 20

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    So beautiful in words and photo. Newborns are so fuuny but when they get a little stronger and run around playing, they are adorable. Sheila


  • arafura gold member
    April 20
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    Lovely poem. Great pic too!

  • Beautiful imagery within this piece
    Flawless flow of the unforced rhyming verse--
    Very well done!