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To Remember

To remember when
heart became liquid
falling onto
concrete ground;
a harsh plane
with reality
mixed in the mortar
never to reflect
true intentions and
purpose;

there it was
hot sun, baking
molecules
scrunching  atoms
as beats scattered
unrelenting.

never truly, did
it have a shape
or form - love,
Eros, agape!


The journey goes
beyond time and space
 chooses not to
retrace, and never
lives on borrowed time.

It conjures and lays
quietly, awaiting the magic
of intentions, and glory
of spirit unglued.

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  • darell
    April 27

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    Sweet Beautiful..

    Wow! what a awesome image of love
    in all its glory. Impulsive and risque
    at its best. Felt the passion and
    emotion in your robust pen.
    Fascinating....


  • Kiran silver member
    April 20

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    Beautifully written, so deep and full of emotion. This was a lovely poem.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    April 19

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    wow

    this is amazing! so full of deep thought and emotions..i'm always impressed my friend, always satisfied after reading the words that flow from your mind into your potent pen..


    • LadyLavender gold member
      April 19
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      Thank you swan, I guess the bright sun and warmth of day is fueling the muse. :-)

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