Magics menace times release
Where did the busy go
No urgent calls no expected falls
More of the same each day
Remembering days fulfilled
Tired at the end of a day
Night is a guessing game
Awaiting a new idea
Come raise the cloud of time
Consume my hearts desire
Give back to me that busy day
Filled with life's joyful gifts
Life fulfilled in time
Please tell me what you think
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work never leaves us alone does it
you wrote this so well -
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Thank you for the great comment and applause on this poem. Happy you enjoyed it. Don
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this poem reminds me of when i work and then i havedown time and iam tired of doing nothing by not working
lol
you did a great job on this poenm don
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Ah yes, the end of the day.when we should be able to relax, but do we.Or do we worry and fret until we start the whole process of living again the next day.a day where we are busy and can hide our thoughts from ourselves.Once again, when nightime closes in we have to face the reality of ourselves once again, Ros
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Thank you Ros for the wonderful comment and applause. I've missed you. Don
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a nice write thank you for sharing
maralisa
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Thank you for the compliments on my poem. Happy you enjoyed it. Don
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I really enjoyed the ending of this piece...
Give back to me that busy day
filled with life's joyful gifts
Life fulfilled in time...
Awesome description!
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Thank you Frogzter for the great comment and compliments on my poem. Having a hard time getting into the swing of things lately. Happy you enjoyed it. Don
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