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She Lied.(Rondelet)

She lied to me
I'll never know the reason why
She lied to me
Our romance was just fantasy
That's why sweet sour tears fill my eye
It's tough to see you love dream die
She lied to me.

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  • tears.of.silence
    April 22

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    this is a very powerful short write. I thank you for entering the contest and using a unique form. Best of luck to you. kahy

  • amysticwriter silver member
    April 19
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    good write, such a waste to live a lie...