Chasitized in silence
an inert life
coming to an end
a fallen member of
trust and gratitude.
Soceity turned a
faceless wreck
uncaring, yet undying
no way to stop
it's cruel virus.
Nothing to help
a humble servant
except the hand
of fate foretold
hearing the echo
of a wingless angel.
Author notes
prompt: fallen within an echo
In a list
A contest entry
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Can't think of a title, can you?
Comments
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A pretty clever write. A lot of emotions. It's short but it doesn't lack power. Soceity, should be society.
I liked the stark feel to it. Thanks for entering and good luck. 
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Permanent Vaccine
Drag/Echo
Inoculate
Wingless Echo
Torn Into Silence
Dig the second stanza...
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Oh my, those were all good titles... I picked the first to the last one. Thanks ! Send me another of yours too
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Deep
I especially like the ending.
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