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Orbed Goddess



While the tide and time forever march on,
And the blazing sun arises and sets,
The four seasons are not allowed to sleep;
Yet the moon glows, and then slumbers in rest.

 

 

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  • Maxboy gold member
    April 21

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    A wonderful write and picture sweetie, well done.

    Nice Job Here


  • doolie gold member
    April 20

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    A beautiful write and I love your picture. Of course, you know all the crazies come out when theres a full moon.

    Wonderful~~~Laura


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    April 19
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    Beautiful picture and your beautiful words breathe life into it!
    Very well penned!


  • individuality gold member
    April 19

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    you have a lot going on in your pages, it took me nearly fifty years to load properly lol but at least it was not like yesterday where i clicked in someone's page and ended up having to reboot
    anyways... to your poem - ah yes, the moon, it slides along our lives, we take it for granted these days but in other times it was worshiped and howled up in scenes of madness, the lunatic stirs tonihgt.


    • Cynthia Gaines gold member
      April 19
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      Thank you for the kudos!!

      Sorry about the tech-glitch... I'll try to be more aware from now on. I thought it was a great image, but I don't like to frustrate people either... You have a great sense of humor, and I like that line of yours, "The lunatic stirs tonight." A twist on the old song, "The lion sleeps tonight." Anyway, thanks for dropping in!!


  • poet360
    April 19

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    amazing!!!

    this is a gorgeous piece. i love the ideas and teh imagery you have infused this poem with.
    great write!


  • Sunshine Always
    April 19

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    The moon has always held a certain magic and mystery over the passing of time Cyn. So many things we do even today that its cycle controls..Beautiful background, wonderful words...Excellent my friend...Peace and love always ...mal


  • Puppydog gold member
    April 19

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    BEAUTIFUL!!!!

    The moon has always been an inspiration to people all over the world. It has within it this drawing power, a force that draws our emotions and thoughts to it. 's


  • paulcreates silver member
    April 19

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    I think there's something wrong with the wiring in your moon. I'd have that looked at. We have beautiful moons like this here where I live.
    paul


  • maralisa silver member
    April 19
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    aw beautiful write thankyo for sharing8hug*maralisa

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