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~Back to Back and Dream

 
 
 
 
They seen how the elders are treated,
so they each vowed off old age.
They refused to live their golden years
strapped down in a cage.
 
 They'd hold hands and contemplate,
they'd sit back to back and dream.
They'd stare at each other and smile
while they'd wade in a cool stream.
 
Drowning was too brutal,
neither one could swim.
Bullets are too messy, so
she left it up to him.
 
 So...
 
 They'd hold hands and contemplate,
they'd sit back to back and dream.
They'd stare at each other and smile
while they'd wade in a cool stream.
 
They went skiing out in California, 
  on snow so fresh and new.
Then they hopped over to Hawaii
to catch a ray or two.
 
Then they chartered a Twin Piper plane,
and words had gone unsaid,
 they just held each others hand,
and she wiped the sweat from his head.
 
He kissed her crazy
 like there was no tomorrow.
He affixed her parachute,
she didn't know it was hollow...
 
 She always said
they'd be rolling in clover.
They leapt over a field
and it was all over.
 
 

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  • maralisa silver member
    April 19
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    aw a beautiful write for the promt good luck in the contestmaralisa

  • I really like this hun. I cant exactly put my finger on what I like so much about it but I really really like this....hah it's dumb to say this but it made e cry. Good job.

    • Sorry you cried. I wanted the reader to know before hand and when they stepped out of the plane, the reader just knew... I sure appreciate you hosting a killer contest like this too! You are very inspirational!