Breath on skin,
beginning and end
a circle, a cycle
synergy of energies
life sparks.
the secret lives of altar
boys and girls that want
to fuck them.
Diatribes and dialectics,
spinning truths like lies,
sending in all false
directions; hide inside
the center.
Do and undo and then undress
yourselves, sheets gripping
bodies naked underneath.
Contrarians agreeing on
hushed honesties brought
to light; smug elocations
smirking education and
hidden agendas.
The secret lives of altar boys
and the obscured societies
they thrive in.
Matters of gravity and not
so great importance, writing
codes on stone houses and
cryptic thoughts on souls
reading words in darkness.
Omega kissing Alpha beneath
a coverlet, wavering hearts pound,
hair tangled bodies.
Oh, the secrets of the altar boys
and the girls that fuck them.
Please tell me what you think
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Bravo! Gotta love me some intrigue in the church.
Seriously, though, this was great. As always, your vocab is off the chain and flows like a river of awesomeness lol.
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thanks you!!!
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I like this. Its well worded, you use (and thusly have) awesome vocabulary. Nice write.
"Contrarians agreeing on
hushed honesties brought
to light; smug elocations
smirking education and
hidden agendas."
I have to say that is my favorite stanza.
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This is amazing. I truly love it. You worded this great and it made perfect sense. Great job. :]
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oh wow, this is fantastic! a big poem in little words, had you hooked to every word. i liked a lot x
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outstanding. this is much better than what i usually hear about altar boys! lovely vocabulary and imagery
you really did an excellent job of cutting through a lot of bullshit with your use of language. great justaposition of pretense and reality.
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