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Clouds

I wish I were a flittering cloud,
High above the trees.
Flying through the air so blue,
Wonderous and free.
I wish I were a beautiful cloud,
Sailing across the sea.
Where I could see the world below,
And they could all see me.
I wish I were a big, grey cloud,
Pumped tight and full of rain,
So I could sob onto to earth,
And be happy once again.
I wish I was an open cloud,
So people could see my tears.
So I wouldn't have to hide them away,
And lock them with my fears.
So I could show you all my colors,
No matter how ugly they be.
Oh, how I wish i was a cloud,
So you could all see ME.

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