There was a time when your
words
left me paused
in mid-air
ready for anything.
Now I am cast adrift
on this sea of anger,
its black depths
can't contain
the churn of my emotions.
Like a thorn pricked finger
you are a reminder
I'd rather forget but can't erase.
Author notes
fun in dysfunction.
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The image you use, the background and most importantly- your words- give this piece a a strong feel that the writer lived these words before they ever thought of putting them to paper, which makes this piece all the more poignant.
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Mind-blowing
I love the first stanza, it could speak for anything and be the start of so much. The spacing of them makes it a mind-blowing piece and the end is sad, angry, and a bit regretful.
It's good to see you still here on AP.
Gypsy--<<
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Excellently dark! Great take on the pic also! Its great to see you writing, I've missed it!
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It's you!
OMG Cat I've missed you and your words
What a dark piece, full of pain and anguish. You have always managed to show me what you feel and push it into my own heart.
I hope you are ok
Brilliant
Love you
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