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Rain all night

Cold rain drops fall on her face
as she silently weeps in sorrow
the moon's dazziling light shines on her cold body
reflecting on her pale white skin with a mysterious glow

Pain fills every nook and cranny
of her body and soul
as she screams out for help
but the only one who hears is the little razor blade

Crimson red blood spills out
now she feels numb just like before
the tears stop falling as she lies in bed
dreaming of the night she fist felt pain and agony

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  • Mademokid
    April 24
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    wow

    nice poem... i like this one alot! keep on writing =)


  • emoempess
    April 21

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    love it

    so dark
    "Crimson red blood spills out
    now she feels numb just like before
    the tears stop falling as she lies in bed
    dreaming of the night she fist felt pain and agony"
    love this part...
    this poetry is not long and not short just perfect