I think about you every day
wonder why things turned out this way
with a broken heart and a scared soul
in hand
once loved is now unloved
i was left to wonder why
all i did was sit and cry
not any more
i wont cry ill lie
and say its okay
ill be fine
inside im doing more than crying
im dying
but you dont care
you already found someone new
but i dont care
in the end you will lose
ive gave you clues and more clues
but you seem so confused
why should you care
you moved on
in the most hurtful way
i dont even know what to say
in the end you feel in love with my best friend
A contest entry
- xx.Feelings.xx by moonlite.lea.
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Comments
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Ouch, this is so incredibly sad!
I can relate to it extremely well...
Fantastic job with this piece. Strong emotions exhibited here.
Bravo
♥ Kate -
wow, not exactly what i was looking fro but this poem was so painful it was just...ouch...GL
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OH! amazing poem!!!!!
the end took me really by surprise!
this is really well written
i love this poem
its wonderful
and its the thurth
i enjoyed it alot!!!
it was amazin!
good luk int he contest! -
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thanxs i just felt like i needed 2 share somethin with the world.i need alot of practice if im actually gonnaa b any good at this but once again thank u so much u gave me lots of confidence
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