The world, from my seat, looks gigantic
I can’t see the fun in this antic
A limo would do—
Or a bike built for two,
But a mini is less than romantic!
Author notes
The world never looks quite so large as when you are driving around in your classic mini.
A contest entry
- 747 by cricketjeff.
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i just love limericks
and this one is top notch
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This was very funny and i have to agree with you on the mini. Boy, don't all thpse other cars look frightening when you are squashed up between them on a busty road. I loved this limerick.
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Thanks! glad you liked it!
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You were kind enough to read and comment on one of my poems so I thought I would return the favor.
This little limerick is clever and, if I may use the word, "cute."
Well done.
Drybones
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wow this is really cleverly done i know limericks are way harder than they look but this is great
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I was a big mini fan, my two eldest boys each owned one, and I've always loved driving them.
Enjoyed the Limerick too ...
Jeff
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LOL! This is great! And... I love the mini it corners like nothing else on the road! If you read my author page I love cars!
Love,
Amera♥
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