I hate to admit it-it's so hard to say....
but it seems i miss you more and more each day
I know we're over and these feelings will fade
but for now my heart is heavily weighed
i look at your picture and i feel turmoil and tears
i thought for sure we'd last not for months but years
and i know it's silly-i know i'm a fool
but i can't help that i still think about you
the little things you said and how the safest place in the world was your arms......
do you know this feeling? do you understand
i want you so badly-please take my hand
i try to reach out to you but no reply
please send a note, a hello...a goodbye?
how did this poem make you feel? how was it good/bad?
Comments
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An honest and sincere portrayal of feelings of emotion in this well versed piece--
Good flow of the unforced rhyming verse!
Very Well Done!
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