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Is It You?


Like a feather caught in a breeze
a voice gently cuts into a moment of time
words lightly float through my mind
they drift in a mind that grieves.

Whispers warm the cold night of time
someone's calling for someone to be near
the calmness the gentleness "I am here"
unconfused words entwine.


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  • dame de la riviere
    April 20
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    *HUG*


  • rufina caraid gold member
    April 18
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    "a feather caught in a breeze"

     

    Jeff that is a beautiful line for the beginning of a beautiful poem. I understand the personal feelings here too and I empathise with you. You have sent your message succinctly to continue the closeness you shared on earth.  Just Lovely!

    Von