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possible

 

 

 

 

she didn’t need to see his face
to know he felt the same

 

 

 

 

 

each embrace whispered
how he would stretch
one second over the Sahara
  for her



and how she would take
the moon at its fullest
and wrap luminescence
around them both

 

 

 

 

 

even though it seemed
i m p o s s i b l e



it would be worth it

 

 

 

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  • landmark
    April 21
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    lovely... "wrap luminescence" great wording.
    beautiful poem.


  • Lanasaur
    April 19
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    heres the link:http://media.photobucket.com/image/sad%20love/lipiz_19995/thSunsetHold-1.jpg?o=9