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Serenade

If I had the voice
I'd sing a love song
If I had a mandolin
I'd serenade you too..
But all I have is a heart
that I entrust to you.

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  • Anthos
    July 6

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    You don't need a voice!

    You don't need a voice to sing such a beautifull song!!! This is gorgeous, thanx you made my day! Encore, encore!!!


  • getjiggy28
    April 18
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    Stunning...

    Oh Stevie, you REALLY do have a talent, this is simply beautiful! I love writes that are short and oh so sweet.

    Hun, your heart is a precious thing, make sure you entrust it to someone who is worthy...

    Just WOW! Keep writing when you're on a roll. Lovely lovely lovely write.