Religions' drawback
they condemn your every sin
claiming not to judge.
Author notes
I won't condemn religion. In fact, I love a wide array of them and their unique personality. Where they go wrog is being hypocritically ethnocentric.
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Agree with Mr Id - This is a very thoughtful ku! Nice job!

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Thank you so much for your comment. I really appreciate it.
As of the last week, I've been tampering and toiling with various poetic styles and topics. I usually don't right poems as short as haikus, but I suppose that my goal with this one is to make a unique, imporatnt, and profound point in very few words.
Thanks for reading, I always love the feedback.
BC.
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Succint and wise. Great words. Powerful, too.
I don't know about ehtnocentricity, but I think the Pope saying that people in Africa shouldn't be given contraception is a good example of the ways in which Christianity, specifically, can harm people, rather than save them.
Great write, very provocative.
Id X



