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Hold me

I drop my happiness,
And you pick it back up,

I have had a bad day,
You still put up with me,

Seldom do I lose my will,
But you are there when I do,
Sometimes I just need a hug,
Yet again I turn to you.

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  • A floatingleaf silver member
    May 3
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    It's so nice just to be able to reach out and hug someone, standing by with a hug...


  • LittleMoon silver member
    April 30
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    Simple and very lovely Sheila