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Silent Bang

Did I have the Gun?

Did I shoot out?

Did I KIlled u?

Did I threaten?

Yes, I had a gun but not pointing towards u.

It eas for misdeeds of few

and

You came in between.

Were you trying to cross the line and come to stop me

or

Was you or(pretending) or (intending) to save me.

It was not I, I was thinking

It was WE, that I intended.

You could never comprehend as you were hung on a tree pf past and reverie of future

You wer thinking a future without us and

of course not with us.

You killed without a gun but with your actions that were blunt and self sufficient to establish the strategy that
you all were following while that tree was your home.

You could not even distinguish that you have crossed the line and wer a part of our Clan.

Death is not the end but a new beginning and we take some time to come out of the imprints it leaves on our minds.

and the greatest thing about is, it comes all of a sudden:  its like a dead end ......but there are lessons : some learn it early and some learn lat  and some never learn.

you felt it or not : do inform

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  • jjtochrist
    April 18

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    interesting

    I love alot of the metaphores you illistraight, alot of people who comment on me tell me to watch my spelling, but its still clear to understand what your expressing.