God has planted moonlight in her eyes.
Silver flowers bloom in the garden of her gaze
To twinkle upon us
As she looks down, fluttering her silver eyelids
In sync with her angelic wings to
Sprinkle
A moonlit fragrance
On the pathways that get lost
In the darkness of the night.
Bowing our hearts to the Moon Angel,
We walk in peace
On Earth.
God has planted moonlight in her eyes.
God's purpose~
Immaculate
By: Saba Sophiya
~All Rights Reserved~
Author notes
Inspired by this picture:
http://www.lindagadbois.com/Star-Light-Star-Bright.jpg
A contest entry
- Starlight Image Contest BY Stardust by Stardust-luvr.
900 points, ended April 27, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Lovely imagery, you have quite a gift in that regard. I'm not sure you're saying anything with this piece, but as an exercise in description I think it's quite successful.
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This was lovely with soft imagery to fill the reader's senses. A delight to read. You take care. Hugs and Smiles. Sandy
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Thanks for your sincere appraisal of my work. Glad you stopped by and enjoyed
Take care,
Sophie
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Absolutely beautiful!!!!! This is delicately constructed like filligree lace and the imagery is just divine!
When I was a little girl I thought the moon was mine and that somehow I came from there. I still carry a great fondness for moonlight!
Stunning! I'm excited to read more of your work now. Thank you for this special write.
Lianonsidhe
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thanks so much. I am glad u enjoyed my work!!
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on the wings of slumbering dreams peace shall lay its head upon sofness and hope for an awakened new day of sadness and woe left in the past wake to brighter tomorrows well done and thank you for entering many blessings always xxx
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BEAUTIFUL!!!!!
This is lovely and goes so beautifully with that awesome picture!
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