She was the sweetest thing I'd ever seen,
With golden hair and eyes of green.
Her skin was California tan,
Her lips would tempt most any man.
Her smile was warm as a winter fire,
Her body filled me with desire,
So fit and firm and fully packed,
Believe me, pal, that girl was stacked.
She looked my way and said, "Hello.
I sure could use a friend, you know."
My chest was pierced by Cupid's dart,
From point blank range, right through the heart.
She snuggled close, she held me tight,
She said, "Won't you take me home tonight?"
She told me that her name was Fawn,
That we'd make sweet love until the dawn.
In a voice so soft, I thought I'd die,
She whispered sweetly, "I'm a guy."
Author notes
With a few minor embellishments for poetic purposes, this is a true story.
A contest entry
- wrestling with the devil by sweet arrival.
700 points, ended July 12, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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*gasping for breath*
I think I just laughed my face off.....
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Excellent!
I loved it and am laughing my fool head off. Being from Southern California originally, I really could appreciate what you were saying, then WHAM, the moment of truth!...Oh My..."I'm a guy." Still busting a gut over here....! DeeDee
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HA! fantastic hehehehe
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WHAT??????????
a guy? I'm sorry..um..well it made for a lovely poem! and you deserve a trophy! this was funny shit!
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Now this cracked me up. I was kinda looking for a sweet little ending to a sweet little poem and look what happens. But, I guess you were more shocked than me. This is too good and, I loved it.
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HAHAAHA... dont know if you meant this to be funny, but i guess the laugh i had was more of a shock feeling of finding out what you may not have wanted to know.
you never know what you'll get when you give in like that... wow. good job with the shock value. thanks for the entry. -
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Hey, it was either laugh or cry.
And so much better to find out sooner than later, if you catch my drift. In the words of the Who: "I won't get fooled again."
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Oh wow, talk about selling your soul, a double whammy if that would have pursued...well expressed and written. Blessings.
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Thanks for reading.
Sell it? Hell, I'd have given it away. She was a sexy little devil. [The author would like to state that this last comment is in no way a slur, or reflective of any assumptions or attitudes, toward those with alternative lifestyles.]
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