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lost child

lost child found by me
he said "I love you" and smiled
enter new dimension

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For Jacob, a boy who stepped outside of himself and found me.

A contest entry

Poetry smiles at the reader and asks for compassion

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  • HatedLoveDieingRose
    April 20
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    Good job., i like the poem a lot.. Good luck.


  • individuality gold member
    April 17

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    a good poem, aye to move into another realm and smile with words of pure beauty, no messing about, but right to the point.