The sun and moon share the same withered skies. Staring down upon a broken earth. As if they were gods eyes.
Passing a death sentence on all. Whether they believed or denied. As those who were righteous don’t ascend up high.
And they burn with the wicked and screech god’s name asking why? Why are they being punished? When they never defied.
They receive no answers. As the moon and sun are almost aliened. And a quarter of the population starts to bleed out the eyes.
As buildings collapse. And the seas boil dry. And those who try to pray.
Choke to death on the lies. As parents kneel and cry. Holding pieces of their children.
For that’s all they can find. And those who try to run realize they can’t hide. For the sun and moon are in full eclipse.
And Judgment Day has arrived.
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Comments
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oooh creeppy....
very nerve-wracking makes me want to go to church more often. (well i do go every sunday) any way good write loved it."Choke to death on the lies. As parents kneel and cry. Holding pieces of their children.For that’s all they can find." that part is the part that struck me most. nice job -
i can't wait to see what happens next
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"And they burn with the wicked and screech god’s name asking why? Why are they being punished? When they never defied"
llove this part
and thanks for the entry -
Good!
That was really good!!!
I loved it
It really made me think.
I understand it but I dont
Good job! :]
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