Orbs, orbs, orbs,
Her big blue reflective orbs,
Those gigantic pools of love that are her orbs;
Those orbs;
If she could only see me,
If she only knew how I loved her,
If she could only see the man that is in me,
She would surely love me with those big delightful orbs!
Orbs, orbs, orbs,
Her wonderful laughing orbs,
Those hateful piercing with total humiliation filled orbs;
If I'd only gotten to see her boobs: what orbs!
(LOL)
A contest entry
- Uncliche a Cliche by Emmyb.
1000 points, ended July 15, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I meant a cliche poem in an original way
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this is fun. this is kinda what i was looking for becuse youve written an original poem in a cliche way. its great.
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JUDGED!
hahaha, loved it.
You should change the title cause cliche it is not.
Thanks for entering, best of luck! -
Superb Plus
I love the wry sense of humor in this one, especially the surprise ending. Thanks for sharing this one with us.
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funny
This is very cliche but was very funny all the same, it made me smile Keep that pen flowing
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Good write, it flows very well.. I had to smile all the way! thanks for the entry. Did not find your words so cliche, there is a good originality factor here Lilian
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If I'd only ~gotten~ to see her boobs: what orbs!
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Fixed it, thanks!
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HA !
" I saw that one coming"
( I guess that's why they call it cliche' )
Nice write / you get my vote
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