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Maiden Dove.

Every winter and every spring,
birds come and go to sing the songs that they bring.
Beautiful birds they are nothing to compare,
but something we cannot bare.

With black master putting on a show,
thank heavens, he's only a crow.
But by his side a young maiden is it,
she can do anything and even quit.

As he describes, her puts her in a goddess place of the sea,
as her loving big blue eyes sparkle with light, I see.
To those who come and beg for marriage.
Yet to soon for marred, too soon the carriage.

Soft skin as a snowy white dove,
but she has no one to love...
Her plumped dreadful lips,
her curve from her shoulders to hips.

My young maiden, the one who I seek.
You'll be forever a dove, looking at you makes me go weak.
I will love you from here and there.
I will just love you anywhere.

So I ask you in marriage.
But not to soon for the carriage.

My Maiden Dove.
You were meant to be forever loved.

Author notes

This is to a special someone. Who I missed in a long time.

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  • its so beautiful
    BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!

    Bravo
    x-skylar-x

  • Awe ^^ this is so beautiful. It makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. You wrote this from the bottom of your heart I can tell by the way you wrote about this special person. The imagery is captured beautifully. Such a lovely and creative write. Nice choice of words too.

    - Maria ♥

  • The immagery used here at places makes this poetry very strong and creative as well..beautiful portray..love it..and thanks for sharing..