The olga Patrick looked inside the gourd,
as it sucked him into another realm.
The nature all around, with tropical flowers.
Up ahead there are tropical forests,
and many more gourds to be seen.
Patrick looked into another gourd and it sucked him in.
This time it took him to a fairy castle realm.
With a lot of olgas,
standing around.
He sees his sister in a white wedding gown.
On a white beautiful horse, walking around.
With a Royal Crown,
upon her head. As he comes closer,
the guards stop him in his tracks.
She acted like she didn't no him and said off to the dungeon with you.
The croud calls out, cut him up into schreds.
Later on she sneaks to the dungeon,
and tells him the awful story of there family getting caught.
So I had to wed, in order for them to set our family free,
but I don't believe they will, set our family free.
She sneaked the keys to let Patrick out,
to look for there family.
Lisa I love you be careful,
so she snuck back up stairs so she woun't get caught.
He found underground tunnels, with a lot of locked doors.
As he opned them, he set Faires and Elfs free.
To help him find his family,
he opend all the locked doors and set everyone free.
A s the guards came and said seace them.
The guards was out numbered and end up behind bars,
with magic apples stuffed in their mouths.
All the crearures ran all over the palace, to find Lisa.
They found diamonds rubys and gold.
He found Lisa with blood on her hands,
she stabbed her husband and just wanted to get out of there.
So everyone left the castle and picked up gourds to find thre realm.
They end up at a diamond cave realm,
very shiney sparkling diamonds,
they filled their pocket and struck it rich.
After they went through realm after realm they all found there eay home.
A contest entry
- Tell Me a Story by Lime Ocarina.
700 points, ended April 22, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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I like the story but found a few typo errors. I sent you a revised copy as an instant message here on AP. I hope you do well in the contest.
xoxox
Leo

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A very interesting story, and an interesting story telling method!
Thanks for the entry!



