Yeh well. threesies,
you knows
so you says
walking to the Wyrms,
case I forgot ya knows?
Splat
refibbrilate.
Screech.
Stop that.
Hey ya know?
Major poetic achievement,
falling in love.
Yup.
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Written March 6th, 2004
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Interesting attempt.
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threesies i thought you like twosies. splat is one of my favourite words. i really like this glad you got your heart going again yep
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Man, you know, this was like, you know, twisty, like those twisties, you know?
Yeh, well, you know - that's all I got.
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I agree with Myra...falling in love is messy, and pink and soft and squishy.
Can make you go splat too.
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Lovit
Subtle? LOL@Desiree
Downright outrageous, I would say! All pinkish and purplish and In-ge-lish ohjoyohjoyohjoy! At the fair. With baboons ...Erhm. Balloons.
Fallin'in luv. Whattamess.
Myra X -
I always wanted to use the word "refibbrilate" in a poem. and at last, lute shows me how to do it. actually, I looked the word up in my Dictionary of Poetic Words Nor Generally Known By Texans. it said, sure 'nough, refibbrilate means "holding three balloons." it didn't say what "Wyrms" means. guess we must not have wyrms in texas.
an enjoyable feel-good love poem. -
Very subtle.
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