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time of crying

you said you loved me,
then you left,
i had no idea what to do,
all i wanted was to be with you,
but still im alone,
and my heart is cold as stone,
i try to call,
you press "ignore",
i see you in the store,
you laough and flee,
all at me,
i wish i could get another chance,
in school you give me a rude glance,
every day,
is a new slit,
and by the end of the month,
i have a bunch,
i never eat,
i never sleep,
nothing is fun anymore,
and i try to keep the tears away,
so on my bed i lay,
crying and dieing,
till theres nothing left...

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  • RavenS
    May 26

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    amazing

    you have powerful words that make me cry this reminds me of everything good i used to have and how it all just came to an end just like our lives will one day

  • Luv it!

    I really like this it kinda sounds like my poem "emo kisses" you should read it.


  • xxxtwlohaxxx
    April 28
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    Beautiful

    this poem was beautiful and i love it

  • I LOVE IT!

    i really like this poem alot!!!i can feel the emotion tht was put into this poem!i didnt have a favorite part...i loved it all!!!!keep up the good work!!!

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