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No one comes close to you

I was standing in a room full
Full of thousands and so much more
But you, oh you
You were all that I saw

The glow of your skin
The beauty of your face
The way you walked with grace

I couldn't say
Anyone comes close to you
Oh that would be a lie
I'm not going to tell

Oh No one comes close to you
No one will ever compare
The room full of thousands
It was only you and I
That I saw

The room parted
From left to right
I walked slowly
To get as close to you as I could

The glow of your skin
The smell of your hair
So beautiful
No one could compare
The way your voice floated
With the perfect melody
The way you walked with grace
Only an Angel could dare

Dear no one comes close to you
Yes this is the truth
No one comes close to you
No one ever will

All I see is me and you
In a room full of thousands
I only want to love you
I only want to have you

I want to give you all of me
Yet you seem out of reach
I'm not going to quit trying
Because your worth the wait to me

Beautiful you
Girl of my dreams
Help me make that dream become a reality
Cause dear No one comes close to you

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  • Cerbie20
    September 23

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    this is a really beautiful poem. seriously. and she's lucky. whoever she is, she is really lucky. keep up with the writes. you get better as you go!


  • DarkHeartedLove
    April 28
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    OMG. Thats sweet. Tell her im sure she`ll take you. If she knows.

  • CuttingThroughBones
    April 20
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    The way you wrote this is wonderful


  • GodsRebelChild
    April 20

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    sweet

    you have so much love to give josh i am sure you will be happy with the girl you dream of.....best wishes....


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    April 17

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    This is such a wonderful write. wonderfully written with a wonderful flow of words. This was a pleasure to read.


  • Denerica
    April 17
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    Beautiful obsession, would hope the dream happens. Well written. Blessings.


  • moaner
    April 17
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    beautiful, such love! and the fact that the person in the poem doesn't give up, that they are willing to try at least for this beautiful girl that might never see them or grant their wish is wonderful. inspiraring to us all, who have ever wanted something out of reach, but never let go. pleasure to read x


  • TabbyCat
    April 17
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    Sounded like a lovesong...so sweet and sincere

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