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liar

you put this bullet in my heart,
thats ware all the pain starts,
now in my world it always rains,
and in there world im insain,
are you happy now,
now that im so down,
no one cares,
and this burden i carry is not fair,
and why you left is beyond me,
i dont know what you want me to see,
did i care to much,
or just not enough,
you said you would always be there,
but now i see you lied,
now as time passes by,
the one thing i miss the most,
is holding you ever so close,
but now my heart is fried,
and its all because you lied...

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  • CuttingThroughBones
    April 27
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    Insain spelled incorrectley
    Miscapitalization

    Otherwise very good poem!
    Keep up good work!


  • xxemoxprincessxx
    April 17

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    That stupid WHORE.
    Fucking slutty, cunt-faced, bitch.
    White trash.

    But the poems good.
    :].