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A Summer Breeze (Remembering Marge)

Rare in life are times that bring
A gifted voice to softly sing
Poetic songs that will impart
A melody that fills the heart

How fortunate when it arrives
That we might feel it touch our lives
And gratefully embrace the gift
That gives our weary souls a lift

Just like a summer breeze will blow
O’er heated brows with gentle flow
So quick yet sweet their words flow smooth
Across our hearts and gently soothe

And precious are the times we share
With those who have this gift so rare
To ease our burdens with their smile
And linger here with us awhile

It’s rarer still before life ends
That we can call these poets friends
And though your journey here is through
I’m thankful I was friends with you

Marge, it was a beautiful summer breeze
Thank you my friend

Author notes

Dedicated to Marge Tindal, a very dear poet friend of mine that recently passed away.

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  • what an absolutely lovely sonnet! yOUR LOVE CAN BE FELT FROM BEGINGING TO END. the flow is as effortless as the wind and as powerful as the sea!


  • PurpleSky
    May 1

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    What a lovely tribute and your heart and love shine beautifuly through your words.
    Although sad it is poeticaly beautiful
    huggles
    Lena

  • What a Lovely tribute to your poetic friend.

    I'm sorry for your loss.

    Sincerely,

    ~ ~ Janet ~ ~


  • samantha jean
    April 19

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    'Marge, it was a beautiful summer breeze
    Thank you my friend' - The ending is so beautiful.
    Wonderful and powerful write.

    Thank you for entering, and good luck in my contest.


  • GotLilt
    April 18
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    Your flowing method & wording, you should write for Hallmark. seriously

  • Topnotchsy
    April 17

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    This is a beautiful and touching tribute, flawlessly done!! I hope this write can bring some solace to those who knew her.

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